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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Dear Legal Writer, If you write “is comprised of” or “is comprised by,” you need to read this.
See if you know which of these 3 sentences is correct:
A: The cake comprised 6 ingredients.
B: The cake was comprised by 6 ingredients.
C: The cake was comprised of 6 ingredients.
Dear Legal Writer, Want to get faster at legal writing? Try the Flowers Paradigm.*
Here’s the “how-to”:
For any writing project, cut your process into 4 stages. It helps to think of the stages building a house:
My 3 Top Exam Tips + an IRAC {CREAC} Template
This is for all law students about final exams. I’ve been working really hard on something for you.
It’s a template for an IRAC essay.
It shows my mental process and how I OUTLINED my analysis of each issue--BEFORE I wrote a single word.
9-Point IRAC Primer
—EXAMS: How to Structure an IRAC Essay—
Dear 1L, Follow these 9 steps to make sure you don’t miss out on points.
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1️⃣ Identify the BIG ISSUES.
3 questions you should NOT ask a law student this Thanksgiving
1: What kind of lawyer are you going to be?
2: Where will you be working this summer?
3: Where will you be working after law school?
🔸 For 1Ls, they likely have absolutely no idea.
Your questions will surely cause great stress.
What is an IRAC Exam & How do I write an IRAC Essay?
Dear 1L,
Doctrinal classes teach you to:
—read legal rules & cases;
—see both sides of an issue.
Writing classes teach you to:
How I found my “voice” when I first started posting on LinkedIn
When I first started posting on LinkedIn, I struggled to find my “voice.”
Here are the 3 biggest things that helped me:
1️⃣ I kept a laser focus on a good answer to “WHY?”
Dena Lefkowitz
There’s something magical about meeting in person.
It was 2-2-2022 when I first reached out to Dena Lefkowitz, Esq., PCC ★
— just to say “hey.” (I sent an out-of-the-blue DM.)
“Time and Sweat”
Dear 1L, I thought you might relate to these words by Justice Antonin Scalia.
They were a key theme in his speech on “Writing Well,” as delivered at a 2008 Scribes award dinner in NYC*.
So please know, it is NOT just you.
The Memo is a Bear
Dear 1L, These weeks with the memo were the most brutal of 1L for me.
The memo is a bear for everyone, every year.
I know many of you are struggling out there. Please know I think of you EVERY day.
Be careful with the word “draft.”
Dear Legal Writer, I got 2 kinds of contradictory, negative feedback when I was new at different firms. Both turned on the meaning of “draft”:
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“Why on earth would you spend time at $500+/hr filling in citations when a paralegal could have done that for $100/hr?
Are you making these 4 common mistakes in your Memo?
Dear 1L, Every year, I see the EXACT SAME substantive mistakes in 1L legal
memos.
Here are the 4 biggest, common culprits.
I’ll get you a self-editing checklist with technical fixes tomorrow For now, start by fixing these:
Law schools do students a disservice
Law schools do students a disservice by treating legal-research & writing (LRW) professors like third-class citizens.
It’s been like this since I went to law school in the 1990s, and it’s largely still like this today.