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Dear 1L, When your first & only feedback in law school is a 35/100 on a Contracts midterm, it’s time for some serious soul-searching.
That was me in Oct. 1993, and I thought the world was going to end.
To be sure, like most all 1L midterms, it was merely a “practice” exam.
But to me, it was devastating.
Dear Legal Writer: If I told you to cut down your use of “expletives” in legal writing, you might retort, “I would never use expletives in legal writing.”
Alas, but you do.
Here’s what I mean:
🔹 Definition:
An “expletive” doesn’t just need to be a profane or obscene term.
Dear 1L, When you are doing legal research into case law, there will come a point when you wonder,
“Have I done enough?”
Follow these 7 Steps to make sure you don’t miss a key case.
🔹 1. Find, pull, and skim 3 relevant cases (found from secondary sources, sample briefs, searches under keywords & headnotes, etc.).
Dear 1L, Don’t make this mistake on your Memo.
It’s easy to make it. I did.
It was fatal.
Here’s what happened and 3 lessons learned.
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Dear 1L, Learn when to capitalize “court.”
RULE:
In addition to the obvious (that you must capitalize “court” whenever you write out its full Bluebook citation), there are only 3 other instances that require or permit capitalization:
1️⃣ CAPITALIZE SCOTUS (Supreme Court of the United States)
Dear Legal Writer: Put a period or comma INSIDE the ending quotation marks, regardless of whether that period or comma appeared in the original, quoted material.
Scope: U.S. Legal Writing*
Here are two examples.
1️⃣ NO COMMA IN ORIGINAL
Original: “The complaint lacked sufficient facts to survive summary dismissal, but we grant plaintiff leave to file an amended complaint.”
Dear 1L, Many of you have midterms coming up. Here’s a primer + 9 reminders for your first exam experience.
🔷 PRIMER
🔸 Most 1L exams (and all bar exams) present a hypothetical fact pattern followed by a general “Discuss” prompt (or a set of questions that identify which issues you are to discuss).
Dear 1L, Here’s a writing tip for content creators, as well as legal writers.
I’ve noticed that many of you start posts with the word “As,” as in:
“As a lawyer,”
“As a law student,” or
“As an [anything].”
⚠️ Doing that is dangerous. In fact, you need to watch out for any sentence that starts with “As a . . .”
Dear 1L, I bet you never thought law school would mean new worries over where you put your commas.
But it does.
And I’m not just talking about Bluebook cites. I’m talking about your prose.
Here’s the deal: Lawyers need to use 2 commas when other writers don’t.
Just learn them now: the Oxford Comma & the TICTAC Comma.
Dear Legal Writer, When you still have too many pages and can’t find more fluff to cut, try this:
1️⃣ Fully justify your body text.
—That will cut lines b/c full justification fits more letters per line than left justification.
2️⃣ Working from the bottom up, systematically attack each paragraph with only a few words in its final line of text.
Dear1L, I built a business, a brand, and a new professional life—all through LinkedIn.
Here’s the built-a-business side of the story.
1️⃣
In 2016, I got laid off from a BigLaw firm. I can’t lie: that stung.
In the intervening years, I “tried on” many roles. None quite fit.
Dear1L, “I love the sense of community your posts create on LinkedIn.” 👆
THIS is what it’s all about.
The comment on my post from a 2L made my day. It stands for everything I longed for when I started Dear 1L®.
Thank you to every member of my community.
Dear 1L, “Have you started your ‘Outline’ yet?”
Some gunner with a briefcase asked me that during my very first week. I didn’t even know what an “Outline” was.
Here’s what I wish I knew then:
🔷 It’s not the Outline itself that matters.
Dear 1L, Hot off the presses!
I can’t wait to dive in.
What’s on your reading list today?
💌 Amanda
Dear 1L, “Because” is a key word in legal writing. Use it.
But be careful after a negative verb: “because” causes ambiguity.
Here are some examples:
1️⃣ She was not promoted because she is female.
—Was she promoted? That isn’t clear.