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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Dear 1L, It’s hard to uncover a law firm’s true culture before you actually start working there.
But no law student wants to have to work at a firm only to find out it’s a mismatch.
You really need to do some detective work first.
Here are 6 markers of firm culture to look for & some ideas for how you might go about uncovering them:
Gary Provost Poem on Varying Sentence Length
I received a comment on my recent “5 Hacks” post from someone I don’t know. She seemed quite exasperated by it all:
“Writing great fiction is the antithesis of documenting complex transactions. . . . How can I restore the creative skill I possessed prior to becoming a legal writer?”
LinkedIn Connect
Today I aim to help lawyers & law students network on LinkedIn.
🟢 BONUS for law-related content creators & others who post:
—> Drop a link to one of your recent posts. I will reciprocate by engaging with it, and I bet others will, too!
🔵 LAW STUDENTS: I know that LinkedIn can seem scary sometimes. I still find that today.
Five Hacks to Cut Words from Briefs
Use these 5 hacks to make your brief fit the page limit—without cutting substance.
🔷 1: Convert sentences to active voice.
“The boy hit the ball.” (Active)
—is shorter than—
Summer Intern
It started with a cold DM on LinkedIn.
And that DM started unremarkably:
It was a pre-law college student seeking experience in the legal world who wanted to know if I was aware of any internship openings or had any ideas, advice, etc.
Standard fare.
TICTAC Comma Rule
What’s the most important comma for clear legal writing? It’s beyond dispute. Follow this Rule:
Two
Independent
Clauses
Take
A
5 Prep Steps For On-campus Interviews (OCI)
Dear Rising 2L,
Until now, you likely have not experienced many, if any, formal job interviews with BigLaw lawyers. Here’s what to expect and 5 suggestions to help prepare.
IN ADVANCE
Use Caution Handling “However”
When I review your writing, one of the first things I do is reword almost all sentences that start, “However, . . .”
“But starting sentences that way is grammatically correct,” you might protest.
And you’d be right. Even so, I suggest you limit your use of this sentence-starter.
7 Steps to Improve Your Writing Sample
Dear Rising 2L: If you use your 1L memo or brief as a writing sample for job applications, you have some work to do. Here are 7 key steps:
1️⃣ Incorporate the final corrections and edits from your TA & professor.
Include a Cover Memo with Your Writing Sample
Dear Rising 2L: It’s best to include a short, concise cover memo with the writing sample you send to prospective employers.
Why? Because it’s a golden opportunity to set the stage and to start “making friends” with your Reader.
VOCABULARY: In-house Counsel, Outside Counsel, FractionalGeneral Counsel & More
Learn this lawyer lingo:
IN-HOUSE COUNSEL:
This term refers to lawyers whose employer is an entity (such as a corporation or organization) that is not “in the business” of providing legal services to clients. In-house counsel typically serve one and only one client: their employer.
3 Resume Fixes for Every Law Student (and Lawyer)
I must have seen more than 100 law-student resumes over the past year. Often I see them after a law-school career office has reviewed, and after everyone thinks the resume is “final.” Here’s the problem:
I still catch formatting errors and see other obvious areas for improvement.
Here are 3 fixes for every legal resume:
Reunion
Every year when law-firm recruiting season starts, law students start buzzing about the enormous starting salaries at Big Law firms. (It’s $215,000+ in NYC now, I understand.)
A heavy dose of reality is needed.
At my 10-year high school reunion, I spoke with a classmate who’d gone straight from college to a T14 law school, and then to a top-ten, “white shoe” firm in NYC. He’d just finished three full years as an associate there.
How to Shorten & Personalize Your LinkedIn Address
Dear Rising 2L,
👉 You know LinkedIn is the first place any prospective employer will look you up. (And they will look you up.)
You’ve got early OCI* coming up (*on-campus interviews).
Don’t make it hard for law firms to find you.
“Thus, . . .” and “Therefore, . . .” are Getting Tired: Try these Alternatives
Dear Legal Writer,
As a junior legal writer, you likely tend to use “Therefore” and “Thus” too often. And you probably always put them at the start of sentences, followed by a comma.
That can make for some pretty plodding prose. 👎