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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Dear 1L, The comma goes INSIDE the quotes, OK?
Here’s how to remember: “𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐥𝐞 𝐤𝐢𝐝𝐬 𝐦𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐲 𝐈𝐍𝐒𝐈𝐃𝐄 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐟𝐞𝐧𝐜𝐞.”
🩳 Commas and periods are little kids.
They sit on or BELOW the line.
“Little kids” are short.
They’re too short for cars to see.
They must play INSIDE of the fence.
They must do that for their safety.
👖 But semi-colons and question marks?
Exclamation points, too?
They’re all big kids.
Dear 1L, Beware of this mistake I made when I wrote my very first memo. It has been 33 years, but it STILL bothers me when I think about.
I based my whole analysis on what the courts SAID about my issue instead of focusing on which side had WON in each of the cases.
Be careful!
👉 A case can contain language that seems helpful to your position when the case itself actually HURTS your position.
What to do if you fail a midterm:
Dear 1L, I got a 35 on my Contracts midterm.
(35 out of 100.)
It was Oct 1993.
It was my first & only feedback.
I thought the world was going to end.
And it forced some intense soul-searching.
To be sure, like most 1L midterms, mine was merely a “practice” exam. But to me, it was devastating.
Dear 1L, Everyone I talk to is dying right now.
Between midterms, the memo, AND recruiting for summer internships, there simply aren’t enough hours in the day.
And the memo is killing you.
It’s eating up way more time than expected, and you feel lost on how to structure the Discussion section.
You’ve got cases going both ways, arguments that seem to fit in multiple places, and no clear sense of what should come first.
Get your sample 1L Memo
🔷 FRAMEWORK
Assume your hypothetical asks whether a plaintiff can prevail on an issue that has three subparts, A, B, and C and that you conclude the plaintiff is likely to satisfy A, B, and C—and therefore likely to win on the overall issue. For each subpart section (sections A, B, and C), you should proceed in this order:
A: Plaintiff should satisfy element A.
Will you celebrate with me today? 🎉🥳
Because five years ago, 9-22-2021, I hit “post” here for the first time.
I hoped to find law students who might need my tutoring help.
(I also secretly hoped someone would notice me and offer me a “real” job.)
What I found instead was a professional home, a workplace, and eventually all of you.
And THAT feels worth celebrating.
Dear 1L, There’s a right way and a wrong way to DM a lawyer on LinkedIn.
🛑 The WRONG WAY is to:
-Pick a random lawyer
-Learn nothing about them
-Send them a generic message
-Explain you want to “pick their brain”
-Make clear you seek a 1-time transaction
-Suggest that they “jump on” a 60-min Zoom
I recently reviewed a 2L résumé that broke my heart. 🥲
3.7+ GPA.
Three years of experience.
Impressive volunteer work and leadership.
Yet she had received not one interview through OCI.
Her career-services office could not understand why. Neither could I—until I saw the actual résumé.
Dear Legal Writer ("DLW"): This is a post ("Post") about a pesky habit ("Habit") I see in most litigators (“Litigators”).
The Habit: sticking a word in quotation marks, then stuffing it in parentheses (hereinafter, a "Parenthetical").
Once you start suffering from this Habit, you can't stop, which is a condition I call can’t-stop-itis ("Can't-Stop-Itis").
——Exhibit A ("Exhibit A")——
Dear 1L, I hate the saying, “Look left; look right;
and 3 years from now,
only 1 of you will be here.”
Old law-school deans apparently used to say that to 1Ls on their first day of law school.
Maybe they thought it would incentivize students to work hard from Day 1, but boy doesn’t that quote miss the boat—
Here’s what I want you to think about instead:
A 1L wrote me yesterday, at the end of her first week of law school:
"When doing all these readings, I find myself unable to really comprehend what I'm reading, even after a few rereads and taking hours upon hours for just one class. Do you have any tips for improving comprehension while not taking forever to get through all this material?"
Here is the letter I wrote back—
It’s for her, and for every new law student who is spending hours and hours reading and worrying that everyone else somehow "gets it."
I made a mistake. And I’m gonna admit it:
I was skeptical about Jimmy. Jimmy Lai
And I underestimated him.
In fact, when he sent me a copy of his book, “Quietly Influential,” all I could think was:
▪️ What did some random Oklahoma lawyer who’d started posting years after me have to teach me about LinkedIn?
Dear Legal Writer, This one small edit will instantly upgrade your brief: Move “however” to the middle of the sentence.
Wow, see the difference it makes:
-- To err is human. However, to forgive is divine.
-- To err is human. To forgive, however, is divine. ‼
Try this edit today!
Dear 1L, Lawyers have some wacky ways of writing things.
Learn them now so you don’t lose points when it counts.
1. In the legal world, we spell the word “judgment” without an “e.”
—> Change your Word settings so they autocorrect “judgement” to “judgment” when you type.
Although both spellings work in the non-legal context, now that you’re joining the legal world, you should probably just start using the “judgment” spelling in everything you write.
Dear 1L, I need to warn you about the quicksand. Every law school has some.
It lures you in with the promise of high grades, a job at a big firm that pays well, and a credential that makes your school look good.
And it is very hard to climb out of once it has you.
Before you know it, you're stuck—convinced Big Law is your only path to success, even if it was never part of your plan to begin with.