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Law schools do students a disservice
Law schools do students a disservice by treating legal-research & writing (LRW) professors like third-class citizens.
It’s been like this since I went to law school in the 1990s, and it’s largely still like this today.
6 Ways to Slog Thru Legal-Writing Fog
Dear 1L, No 1L wants to spend all weekend inside writing a legal memo, but many of you will be.
Please know that even seasoned lawyers get stuck when writing up a legal analysis that’s new to them.
Dear 1L, When you’re new to legal writing, it’s natural to think:
—Courts’ words sound better than your words
—Courts’ full sentences should be quoted at length
—Courts’ reasoning will be more persuasive than your own
Instead, you should know:
Dear 1L, On Oct. 1, I set out to start putting together all my letters into some sort of “book.” (It’s scary to say that out loud.)
I also started a “book journal,” so I’d have someone to talk to.
It’s been a lonely road, so far.
Going round and round in my own head.
Listening to people who put me down.
Dear 1L, 👉 Get your sample 1L Memo here—
Dear 1L,
As you know, law-school ethics codes prevent anyone from assisting with specific, 1L writing assignments before final drafts are submitted.
I see these memos after-the-fact, when I help students with job applications.
Dear 1L, I had IRAC. Most now teach CREAC.
There’s also CRAC, TRAC, and TREAC.
I could go on, but won’t.
And instead of explaining it to you in writing now, I’m working on finishing a fictional model “Memo” for you that illustrates the basic structure.
Dear 1L, Imagine the Reader of your Memo will be someone who just graduated law school—a 4L.
That’s someone just a few years above you.
{—Of course you must follow all your professor’s rules and style preferences, but otherwise, forget them as your Reader.}
Dear 3L, 😥 In the past few months, I’ve seen several jobless 3Ls’ resumes that have broken my heart.
This is AFTER these resumes have been through multiple career-services-office reviews,
AFTER these resumes have been sent to hundreds of law firms and other prospective employers, and,
LONG AFTER the students have been through the formalized OCI process.
Dear 1L, When your first & only feedback in law school is a 35/100 on a Contracts midterm, it’s time for some serious soul-searching.
That was me in Oct. 1993, and I thought the world was going to end.
To be sure, like most all 1L midterms, it was merely a “practice” exam.
But to me, it was devastating.
Dear 1L, When you are doing legal research into case law, there will come a point when you wonder,
“Have I done enough?”
Follow these 7 Steps to make sure you don’t miss a key case.
🔹 1. Find, pull, and skim 3 relevant cases (found from secondary sources, sample briefs, searches under keywords & headnotes, etc.).
Dear 1L, Don’t make this mistake on your Memo.
It’s easy to make it. I did.
It was fatal.
Here’s what happened and 3 lessons learned.
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Dear 1L, Learn when to capitalize “court.”
RULE:
In addition to the obvious (that you must capitalize “court” whenever you write out its full Bluebook citation), there are only 3 other instances that require or permit capitalization:
1️⃣ CAPITALIZE SCOTUS (Supreme Court of the United States)
Dear 1L, Many of you have midterms coming up. Here’s a primer + 9 reminders for your first exam experience.
🔷 PRIMER
🔸 Most 1L exams (and all bar exams) present a hypothetical fact pattern followed by a general “Discuss” prompt (or a set of questions that identify which issues you are to discuss).
Dear 1L, Here’s a writing tip for content creators, as well as legal writers.
I’ve noticed that many of you start posts with the word “As,” as in:
“As a lawyer,”
“As a law student,” or
“As an [anything].”
⚠️ Doing that is dangerous. In fact, you need to watch out for any sentence that starts with “As a . . .”
Dear 1L, I bet you never thought law school would mean new worries over where you put your commas.
But it does.
And I’m not just talking about Bluebook cites. I’m talking about your prose.
Here’s the deal: Lawyers need to use 2 commas when other writers don’t.
Just learn them now: the Oxford Comma & the TICTAC Comma.