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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Dear 1L, Expel “regard” from your legal writing.
And while you’re at it, cut “regard” from your vocabulary altogether:
👎 “Regarding”
👎👎 “In regard to”
👎👎👎 “As regards”
All of these sound like nails on a chalkboard in legal writing.
They bloat your sentences and make them sound clunky and awkward
Dear 1L, Justice Elena Kagan apparently didn’t rush to “write home about” her 1L fall grades, either.
She only received two, according to reports, and they came as a shock:
a B in Crim;
a B- in Torts.
True, Justice Kagan was at Harvard Law School—where simply passing might be cause to celebrate—but her story should inspire you wherever you attend.
Dear Legal Writer: Stop writing “the court found”!
“Find” and “hold” mean very different things.
▪️ “Find” refers to determining facts—what actually happened. This is the job of a fact-finder (a jury, or sometimes a judge in a bench trial or preliminary hearing).
▪️ “Hold” refers to a legal conclusion—a court’s determination of what the law means or what the law requires, given the facts.
Dear 1L, “To be sure” is a genteel expression that lawyers use a lot. Perhaps you’ve noticed.
Well, here’s why we use it and how you can do so effectively in your spring brief:
🔷 “To be sure” signals, “I will now acknowledge the point that most hurts me, in hopes of defusing it on my own terms.”
Dear Legal Writer, If I had a dollar for every time someone on The Bachelor used “myself” incorrectly . .
— “The date was amazing for Brad and myself.”
— “Sarah and myself have a real connection.”
— “This journey has really helped myself grow.”
❌ NO! NO! NO!
(Somewhere, a grammar teacher is sobbing into a rose.)
Dear 1L, Hi. I hope you are OK. Everyone seems to be in some state of reeling right now, with fall grades coming in.
Please, if you didn’t get what you’d hoped for, please know there’s nothing wrong with you, and you are not some sort of screwup.
—> What happened is you got screwed by a brutal curve.
Dear 1L, They say, “Those who get A’s end up teaching. Those who get B’s end up practicing, but they are taking orders from the C’s (who are out on the golf course).”
I’ve heard the expression articulated in a number of different ways over the years, and they all piss me off.
So here’s what I want you to remember instead:
In 2020, I was a washed-out, unemployed lawyer with zero presence (anywhere).
I hadn’t worked a “real job” in 5 years;
I’d let my lawyering skills lapse;
I’d let my people skills lapse;
I’d let my self-worth lapse;
I’d become a nobody.
But the worst part was having no community.
Dear Legal Writer: Never put a comma before beginning parentheses.
It’s unnecessary, and it’s considered redundant.
WRONG: The teacher said “hi” to only one student, (whose name was Charlie).
WRONG: The plaintiff, (who had a strong case), looked confident at the hearing.
12 resolutions for eager-to-be-better legal writers:
In 2026, I will:
Put more verbs in the active voice (1)
& use “that,” not “which”
when given the choice (2).
I’ll use “therefore” or “thus”
(but never “as such”) (3),
and I’ll throw away my “However, . . .” crutch (4).
Dear Legal Writer: Stop saying “the same” in legal writing.
“The same” leaves havoc in its wake. To illustrate:
🔹 "She delivered the goods to the warehouse and then sold the same."
—Does "same" refer to the goods or the warehouse?
🔹 “The contract has a 30-day notice rule. Failure to comply with same will result in penalties."
As a law student, I loathed “networking.”
—To me, it meant awkward alumni dinners, bar ass’n meetings, and cocktail mixers with lawyers 20–40 years older than me.
—I spent events like those wearing a plastic smile, laughing at jokes I didn’t understand, and feeling like a complete idiot.
One thing I do is review legal resumes. I see them from a full spectrum of peeps—
-law school applicants,
-law school students,
-full-fledged lawyers of all levels.
I’ve identified the top 10 most common errors.
So I made a checklist for you.
I hope it helps!
Dear Legal Writer: Instead of “one of the parties,” try “one party.”
▪️ Example: “There’s no unlawful wiretapping if one of the parties consents.”
✅ Improved: “There’s no unlawful wiretapping if one party consents.”
Shorter
Cleaner
Better
My brother Nick has published a book!
It’s called “Fagan of Hoboken & the Horseshoe,” and it tells the wild—and true—story of our great‑grandfather, Lawrence Fagan (1851-1921).
🔹 Born in Dublin, Fagan came as a child to a Lower Manhattan tenement where he attended NYC public schools, and by the late 1800s, he’d settled in Hoboken, NJ, where he worked as a blacksmith’s apprentice on the Hudson waterfront, gradually working his way to become a successful iron manufacturer and an active Democrat.