🔹 Tips for the Brief

Often I would understand an analysis in my head, but I couldn’t get it down into words on the page. The tips I share in the video helped me, and I thought they might help you, too.

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It is monthly (to start), and it will (big surprise) contain 3 bullets.

▪️ 1 tip for legal writers,
▪️ 1 tip for law-student writers,
▪️ 1 tip for LinkedIn writers.

A: Transition from your legal rule/explanation section to your discussion of court decisions:

-Under these legal standards,
-Applying these rules,
-When considering these factors,

I don’t give out model cover letters for a reason. A “model” is the antithesis of what any cover letter should be. Instead, the letter should scream:

“I'm different; I’m better; you want me; you want only me.”

Dear Legal Writer, I was reviewing a few 1L fall memos this week, and I came across a problem that I also see regularly in litigators’ briefs:

▪️ The response to ABC Corp.'s ("ABC") motion is due on __.

I’ve been scared to talk about my book on LinkedIn:

—What if it isn’t good?
—What if it isn’t successful?
—What if it is really nothing at all?

I’ve always been a downplayer.

—I don’t like to create expectations.

it can be hard to decide if law school’s right for you.

But there’s at least one student like that who’s determined to get the inside scoop.

No, he is not reading ‘getting to maybe’ or any of the other, usual suspects.

This is unscripted, so please excuse the format, and I literally just thought of this now, but wow, this has got to be a low part of the year.

-you’ve sent in a million applications for summer internships
-you have no idea where you’re going to be over the summer

I used to dread it. I used to play out conversations in my mind over and over again. I’d try
—to script my message with just the right words
—to encourage + inspire without putting down,
—to get my explanations clear so they’d learn.

Dear 1L,

Yes and no.

To start, the reason most people don’t send notes with their connection requests is that they want you to accept.

When you find a case with facts and issues similar to those in your spring LRW assignment:

Pull the underlying briefs from the real-life lawyers from the cases.

These lawyers were discussing the EXACT SAME issues you have to write about in your brief.

Today’s message is inspired by a (Nick Bullard) post from last week and a new book called Elegant Legal Writing out tomorrow by (Ryan McCarl).

Nick’s post said: “Friends don’t let friends use TNR in legal briefs.”

Most 1Ls do this:

- they read the question,
- try to figure out the answer, and
- then write an essay to justify that answer.

Instead, do this:

Dear 1L,

Let’s talk about the “Statement of Facts” for the brief you’re writing this spring. It needs to be much more than a list of events:

Your goal is to relay a compelling narrative that engages your reader and elicits sympathy for your client.

When I first showed up on LinkedIn in Sept 2021, the name Laura Frederick was one of the first I heard. So much of what I have done in terms of content creation, personal branding, and starting my own business can be traced back to Laura’s path.

Fast forward to this past December, Laura and I spoke on the phone for the first time.