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Dear Legal Writer: Today’s letter is about “is comprised by.”
“Is comprised by” is always wrong.
Here’s why. ⤵️
“To comprise” = “to contain,” “to consist of,” “to be composed of.”
✅ All these sentences are correct:
-The whole contains its parts.
Do this in the 24 hours before an exam
Sometimes, when a final (or a bar exam) was just days away, I would still be trying to master a lot of concepts and memorize rules. I just didn’t have it in me to take practice tests.
So I didn’t try.
I just read a lot of model essay answers.
3 Ways to Earn Extra Points on a Law-school Essay Exam
Dear 1L,
Don’t forget to answer these questions to earn extra points in your exam essays:
1. Is there a fact that, if different, would change your conclusion?
2. Would your conclusion differ if the case were judged at another time in history?
Learn When & How to Use “i.e.” and “e.g.” [carousel]
Dear Legal Writer:
My friend, Min Cho, suggested that I write about “i.e.” and “e.g.” To begin, please know that unless you’re a Latin scholar, getting these correct is not intuitive.
Both abbreviations get used a lot in legal writing, so you’ll want to make sure you learn and can use them.
Here’s a short guide. ⤵️
Follow this Start-of-Exam Routine to Ward Off Test Anxiety
Dear 1L,
Create an exam ritual to stamp out nerves on test day.
Here’s what worked for me.
Quickly, but methodically, I skimmed the entire exam to assess:
Do you give “TLs”?
I hope you start!
Giving a TL to someone means relaying a compliment about them that came from another person (i.e., from a complimenter you heard or overheard.)
Here’s an example:
I hear a senior partner say that your brief was particularly well-written.
Dear 1L, Here are 3 top reminders for final exams
1️⃣ Brainstorm and outline your answer before you start to write.
If I had allotted 1 hr. for a question, I’d typically spend at least 15 minutes thinking about, planning, and organizing my essay before starting to write.
The more disciplined you can be about this pre-writing work, the more organized and thorough your final product will be.
It’s Time to Blacklist “Prior to.”
Dear Legal Writer:
“Prior to” is NOT a good synonym for “before” in legal writing.
It’s stiff.
It’s stilted.
It’s stuffy.
🔻 “Prior to” will not make you sound smarter than “before.”
ANNIVERSARY POST
Dear Matt,
Marrying you was the best decision I ever made.
What an extraordinary life journey we’ve had together.
Happy, happy 25th Anniversary—
I am so excited for another 25, and more!
What to Read the Summer Before Law School
Here are book recommendations contributed by hundreds of lawyers & law students for pre-law summer.
🗳️ If you could pick only 1 or 2, which would you choose & why?
1. 1L of A Ride (Andrew McClung)
2. Getting to Maybe (Richard Fishl)
Musings on BigLaw Life
Dear 1L, I was an associate at two firms. Both were BigLaw.
♦️ FIRM A
Associates were not allowed to send department-wide emails, such as emails seeking models or asking if anyone had faced an issue before.
I believe the theory was that receiving associate emails was annoying for partners; it wasted their valuable time.
How to Use an Em-Dash & Why You Should [carousel]
Dear Legal Writer:
Before you use your next em-dash, make sure you know what you’re doing.
📍 Apparently, almost no 1Ls have been taught how to use an em-dash.
📍 I haven’t seen a law student use an em-dash properly in any of the writing samples I’ve reviewed these past 3 years.
Why I Took the NY Bar Exam from the Floor of a Private Office
I had to take the NY-state bar exam lying on the floor of a private office, about a mile from the main test site. Here’s the backstory.
Things all started going downhill for me during 3L spring. On the outside, it looked like I had it all together:
—grades that put me atop the class;
—a BigLaw job set for fall; and
—a law-review Note ready to publish.
Dear Legal Writer: Is “terminate” a synonym for “fire”? Yes and No.
Dear Legal Writer: I once had a BigLaw partner wave an imaginary assault rifle and simulate a scene from “The Terminator” when imparting feedback on my writing:
“Who are you, the Terminator?” she asked.
The partner was very senior, and she was also rather rotund, wearing a floral house dress & ballet flats at the time—all of which made her act quite amusing.
Aim for an Engaging Style in Your Spring Advocacy Briefs
Dear 1L,
Last year, you had to write a personal statement to persuade a law school to admit you.
You may have been told to aspire for an essay that would be “a pleasure to read.”
If so, you got some very good advice.