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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Search by word to find what Iโve written on the topic of your choosing!
I drafted 7 perfect pages (or so I thought), but all I heard back was:
โ๐๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฌ?
๐๐จ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐???
๐๐ข๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐จ ๐ 7-๐ฉ๐๐ ๐ ๐
๐๐๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐๐ ๐ก๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฌ?โ
The partner was incredulous, her voice rising in pitch and exasperation with each question
Dear Legal Writer: The 3 most important things to recall when writing any brief:
1: Your reader is busy.
2: Your reader will NOT be reading for pleasure.
3: Your reader WILL be reading to extract information.
How to Write an IRAC Essay for law school examsโ
Dear 2L, We spoke a lot about IRAC essay exams last year, but itโs been several months. I thought a refresher was due.
Key Reminder: You must do a complete IRAC analysis for every Element of every Claim and Defense or for every Factor in the courtโs applicable test.
Dear Legal Writer, Be careful using โnotโ and โbecauseโ in the same sentence.
Hereโs a classic example:
๐ฟ โShe was not promoted because she is female.โ
Hmm. Was she promoted?
Thatโs not clear.
Dear Legal Writer, โIf you can give good directions, you can probably write a good brief.โ
โThatโs one of Bryan Garnerโs famous quotes, and I want you to think about what it means.
I also want you to go back to the pre-iPhone and pre-Mapquest days when Garner said it:
Dear Legal Writer, For the love of God, please stop writing โBy and through undersigned counsel.โ
Nothing requires it.
Your signature block covers it.
Your hackneyed legalese adds nothing.
STOP!
Dear Legal Writer, Hereโs something I use every day to make my writing betterโ
In fact, itโs my No. 1 tool.
(And itโs not some fancy, new AI program; Iโve been using this same tool for decades.)
I started with 486 connections. Now I have 55,877 followers. It has changed my life. It has been extraordinary.
A big part of my inspiration all along has been Justin Welsh.
He was the first person whose posts I looked forward to every morning on LinkedIn back in 2021.
Dear Legal Writer: A sultry summer day calls for some sentence-slicers.
Try these 6.
Letโs strip some weight from everyoneโs load todayโ
๐ฅต HEAVY โโโ> LIGHT ๐
Dear Legal Writer, I recoil in disgust at โAs such.โ No one uses it correctly.
Even worse, people think they ๐๐ค know how to use it, so they use it too much, like a crutch. โLetโs learn to tell wrong from right, today, OK?
๐ท THE WRONG WAY
Dear Legal Writer, The No. 1 mistake associates make in their drafts has nothing to do with legal writing.
It also has nothing to do with English:
-grammar
-punctuation
-usage
-syntax
(Although many associates get those wrong, too.)
I awoke to amazing news: ๐ญ,๐ฑ๐ฌ๐ญ copies sold for *๐๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฟ ๐ญ๐*!
I owe ALL of my happy news to YOUR consistent support, and I am so, so grateful. ๐๐ป
My dream is to make Dear 1L the book that EVERY law student reads:
Dear Legal Writer: Clarity is more important than brevity, so please stop mindlessly cutting the word โthatโ to save space.
True, โI think you should goโ = โI think ๐ฉ๐๐๐ฉ you should go,โ and each version is correct.
So there, you can cut the โthatโ to save spaceโno problem.
Dear Legal Writer, Is it โmyriadโ or โa myriad ofโ? I did a deep dive. Hereโs my take, and donโt miss the 3 big caveats. โคต๏ธ
๐ท DEFINITION:
The word โmyriadโ means โa countless number of specified things,โ (Oxford English Dictionary), or โan uncountable number.โ
Iโm celebrating Dear 1Lโs birthday today. And while I missed my sales goal by 50 books, I am feeling good:
โช๏ธ I reached 1,450 books for the yearโa HUGE jump of 47 copies since 6 days ago, when I posted an offer to send a free book to 3 incoming 1Ls.
At first, I was embarrassed when only two incoming 1Ls took me up on my free book offer.