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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Dear 1L, I fell into a trap in legal writing class. I’d like to spare you the same. (Skip to the 3 Keys if pressed for time.)
💌 We learned that a doctor had autopsied the wrong body. It was the corpse of a nine year-old girl who’d just died.
Her mother had given no consent and was undone. The thought of her little girl’s body being butchered in that way was just too much for her.
She fell into deep despair.
Dear Legal Writer: It’s OK to end a sentence with a preposition
“You should never end a sentence with a preposition.” Were you taught this rule, too? Well, it’s crap.
Here’s evidence, with some important caveats to think about & references for further reading.
🔷 Bryan A. Garner, Garner’s Modern Legal English Usage, 4th ed. (2016), pp. 723-24:
Dear 1L, You should stop spending so much time preparing for class and start spending more time after class synthesizing what you’ve learned.
🔷 Don’t worry about cold calls. You should be beyond that worry, by now.
—Your course grade is the same, whether you answer brilliantly or pass.
🔷 Skim and book-brief quickly. After class, read answers to sample essay questions.
My very first day working as a new associate in New York, I made a “big mistake.”
I didn’t think it warranted the “big” adjective, or how a partner spoke to me, but it was a mistake nonetheless.
The lesson is to carry something with you to take notes: Always be ready to receive information and assignments when you show up to work with a supervising attorney.
Recommending John Espirian
I write today to thank and recommend someone who helped and inspired me the most during my first year on LinkedIn.
John Espirian is my LinkedIn guru and overall favorite source of advice for marketing and business development (BD). John is humble, kind, and approachable—do follow him, but only connect if you’re willing to do some homework first.
Dear 1L Spotlight: Michael Aronson
💫 Dear 1L - Spotlight
Today I introduce Michael Aronson, a 2L who started as a small-town, ice-hockey goalie with big-time plans: He’d someday become the star starting goalie for the Florida Panthers.
During long training hours with the team’s goalie coach, Michael ultimately seized a spot on a Junior-level team and was one big step closer to realizing his hockey-star dream.
Dear 1L, Try to get outside today (Sunday)
Dear 1L,
I know that Sunday is likely a “stay in & catch up on reading” day for you. I won’t add to your burden long. Just a thought from the mother in me:
Do try to get outside. It is so good for the soul. And the better your whole self feels, the better you will do your reading—the better you will perform overall.
Dear 1L: 10-Point Exam Checklist to Make Your Analysis Robust
💌 Dear 1L,
“Your analysis is not robust enough.” That is what law professors think about most of your essays on exams. I ultimately created these 10 steps to avoid that feedback.
▫️ The steps presume that you can identify the major issues that become Claims and Affirmative Defenses, so they are not a panacea, but they should help you write a thorough analysis of the issues.
Dear 1L, I got my Contracts midterm back. I scored a 35/100. I was devastated. Yes, it was only a “practice” exam, but I freaked out. I think I cried.
💌 Dear 1L,
I wallowed. I wavered between angry disbelief and utter embarrassment.
I had done all the reading; I had attended every class. And I had studied SO much.
I knew the material by heart.
Dear 1L: Try speaking the explanation out loud
Dear 1L,
When you write your first legal memo, you may feel like you understand (sort of) a legal analysis in your head, but you can’t seem to get it to make sense on paper.
The words just don’t flow.
If that happens, try this:
Dear 1L: Definitions of Claims, Defenses & Affirmative Defenses
💌 Dear 1L,
There is a difference between a defense and an affirmative defense. Learn it before doing a law school exam.
—>See link in comments for part 1 of this primer, which describes Claims and Elements of Claims.
Dear 1L: Defenses vs. Affirmative Defenses
💌 Dear 1L,
With midterms on my mind, I write to share something that helped me on exams and learning about litigation more generally:
I thought about how a case starts in the real world. To understand that, I had to learn some terminology and the differences between and among:
Dear 1L Spotlight: Renee Austin
Today Dear 1L spotlights retired chemical engineer Renee Austin — the first in her family to attend college or law school.
Renee started law school as a part-time student in Michigan, but she was also working full-time as an engineer. She quickly realized that institutional barriers and insufficient program resources meant no good opportunities for her as a part-time student. She withdrew after two semesters.
Personal Branding: My Birthday
💌 Today is my birthday (53), so I’m feeling brave. Here’s a bit about me.
I am a mother and a wife. My daughters have always been my biggest source of pride, and my husband my biggest source of support. I am very lucky. But this September has been challenging.
▪️ Mom has really been aging.
▪️ This fall is also my first with an empty nest.
Dear 1L: “It depends”
Dear 1L,
You all must be getting quite sick of hearing, “It depends.” That, plus you keep reading virtually identical cases with diametrically different results.
Exasperating!
It seems backwards. You got into law school because you showed you knew how to find “correct” answers.