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How to Write an IRAC Essay for law school exams—
Dear 2L, We spoke a lot about IRAC essay exams last year, but it’s been several months. I thought a refresher was due.
Key Reminder: You must do a complete IRAC analysis for every Element of every Claim and Defense or for every Factor in the court’s applicable test.
Dear 1L, Lawyers have some wacky ways of writing things.
Learn them early so you don’t lose points when it counts.
1. In the legal world, we spell the word “judgment” without an “e.”
—> Change your Word settings so they autocorrect “judgement” to “judgment” when you type.
Dear Legal Writer, Be careful using “not” and “because” in the same sentence.
Here’s a classic example:
👿 “She was not promoted because she is female.”
Hmm. Was she promoted?
That’s not clear.
Dear 1L, I hate the saying, “Look left; look right; 3 years from now, only 1 of you will be here
Old law-school deans apparently used to say this to 1Ls on the first day of law school.)
Here’s what I want you to think about today instead:
Dear Legal Writer, “If you can give good directions, you can probably write a good brief.”
—That’s one of Bryan Garner’s famous quotes, and I want you to think about what it means.
I also want you to go back to the pre-iPhone and pre-Mapquest days when Garner said it:
Dear Legal Writer, For the love of God, please stop writing “By and through undersigned counsel.”
Nothing requires it.
Your signature block covers it.
Your hackneyed legalese adds nothing.
STOP!
Dear Legal Writer, Here’s something I use every day to make my writing better—
In fact, it’s my No. 1 tool.
(And it’s not some fancy, new AI program; I’ve been using this same tool for decades.)
6 Markers of Firm Culture to Look for & How to Uncover Them
It’s hard to know a law firm’s true culture before you actually start working there.
But no law student wants to start working somewhere only to find out it’s a mismatch.
You really need to do some detective work first.
I started with 486 connections. Now I have 55,877 followers. It has changed my life. It has been extraordinary.
A big part of my inspiration all along has been Justin Welsh.
He was the first person whose posts I looked forward to every morning on LinkedIn back in 2021.
Dear Legal Writer: A sultry summer day calls for some sentence-slicers.
Try these 6.
Let’s strip some weight from everyone’s load today—
🥵 HEAVY ———> LIGHT 🎈
Dear Legal Writer, I recoil in disgust at “As such.” No one uses it correctly.
Even worse, people think they 𝙙𝙤 know how to use it, so they use it too much, like a crutch. —Let’s learn to tell wrong from right, today, OK?
🔷 THE WRONG WAY
Dear Legal Writer, The No. 1 mistake associates make in their drafts has nothing to do with legal writing.
It also has nothing to do with English:
-grammar
-punctuation
-usage
-syntax
(Although many associates get those wrong, too.)
I awoke to amazing news: 𝟭,𝟱𝟬𝟭 copies sold for *𝗗𝗲𝗮𝗿 𝟭𝗟*!
I owe ALL of my happy news to YOUR consistent support, and I am so, so grateful. 🙏🏻
My dream is to make Dear 1L the book that EVERY law student reads:
Dear Legal Writer: Clarity is more important than brevity, so please stop mindlessly cutting the word “that” to save space.
True, “I think you should go” = “I think 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 you should go,” and each version is correct.
So there, you can cut the “that” to save space—no problem.
Dear Legal Writer, Is it “myriad” or “a myriad of”? I did a deep dive. Here’s my take, and don’t miss the 3 big caveats. ⤵️
🔷 DEFINITION:
The word “myriad” means “a countless number of specified things,” (Oxford English Dictionary), or “an uncountable number.”