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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Is OCI Dead?
(And would that be good or bad?)
👉 Only 24% of 1Ls got their summer job offers through OCI last year!
That’s per a new report from the National Ass’n for Law Placement (NALP).
The report says instead of OCI, it’s been these 3 routes by which most 1Ls (56%) got offers:
Dear Legal Writer, Never put a comma before beginning parentheses.
It’s unnecessary and considered redundant.
❌ The teacher said hi to only one boy, (whose name was Charlie).
❌ The judge ruled in favor of the plaintiff, (who had a strong case).
So what about after the ending parentheses? Well, that depends on whether the sentence otherwise calls for one, and it’s often within your discretion.
Dear Legal Writer, Don’t use “while” to mean “although.”
Here’s two examples showing why:
❌ “While the stove is off, the toaster works.”
What does the writer mean, A or B?
A: “Although (=whereas) the stove is off, the toaster works.”
B: “When (=only when) the stove is off, the toaster works.”
♥️❤️ Dear 1L: Get my NEW template—IRAC essay
Dear 1L,
I created a new IRAC template for you.
(FYI: This is NOT in my book.)
The template shows how I structured my exam essays for EVERY course.
It worked on 3 winning bar exams, too.
In 1993, I got the lowest grade of my life during law school.
It was in the 1L legal writing course, and it was devastating to both my confidence and my GPA.
—I wasn’t prepared.
—I had no guide or mentor to help me.
—I experienced the worst academic time of my life.
I never want anyone else to have to endure the same.
Lawyers on LinkedIn sure do bash law schools a lot.
“They don’t teach students the practical skills to be a ‘real’ lawyer.”
Well, that is true in part, but I’ve got a different take when it comes to one skill:
That skill is legal analysis.
Here, it’s the law schools getting it right, and, too often, the “real” lawyers getting it wrong.
Dear 1L, Be careful with the verb “find.”
Do not use it to describe a court’s holdings in your brief this spring. “Find” and “hold” mean very different things.
“But Amanda,” you say, “many lawyers—even judges—use ‘find’ generically all the time to describe the actions courts take.”
—I know. You are right about that. But that does not make using “find” right.
Dear Legal Writer, When I review your writing, one of the first things I do is cut out the expletives.
What’s that you say? “I would never use expletives in legal writing.”
Yeah, I hear that. But you do.
Here’s what I mean:
🔹 Definition:
Dear 3L, This is a mental-health check-in. Everyone assumes it’s the 1Ls with the most stress. But my 3L almost killed me.
On the outside, I seemed to have it all together:
—a top GPA,
—a job lined up for fall, and
—a law review Note ready to publish.
What could I be stressed about?
As it turned out, a lot.
Dear Legal Writer, I’ve got a MONSTER today: “who vs. whom”
Truth is: I’ve been scared to write about it before.
And please don’t say, “ just follow the easy ‘he/him’ rule.”
I know that “easy rule.”
The topic is more nuanced.
So here I go.
We ought to do a better job explaining what it means to “take ownership” as an associate.
By the time you’re a mid-level associate, you’ve put in some tough time—
You’ve endured the early years of 0% control over your schedule.
—You’ve canceled social plans;
—you’ve sacrificed umpteen weekends; and
Dear Legal Writer, Don’t surprise the court.
Judges hate surprises.
Like “surprise facts.”
Those are ones you didn’t describe neutrally in your Facts section.
Yet increasingly, I’m seeing briefwriters get sloppy.
Dear 1L, When should the word “court” be capitalized?
Here are the rules, and I’ve also attached a chart you can save, print, and pin on your wall.*
RULES:
In addition to capitalizing the word “court” whenever you write out its full, formal name (obviously), only 3 other situations require or permit you to capitalize that word:
Dear Legal Writer,
▪️ What’s better in legal writing? “prior to” or “before”?
▪️ Should you add extra spaces below the first line of a post?
▪️ What should you do if your case has multiple corporate entities?
Last week I sent answers to these 3 questions to 𝟭,𝟬𝟳𝟵 people.
How a Pre-law Student Should Start on LinkedIn—
It’s the winter before you start law school.
You’re excited but nervous.
You’re not really sure what to expect.
You want to be prepared.
You want to do the best you can.