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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Inspiration from Justice Kagan
Dear 1L, Justice Elena Kagan apparently didn’t rush to “write home about” her 1L fall grades, either. She only received two, according to reports, and they came as a shock:
a B in Crim;
a B- in Torts.
Dear Legal Writer, We’ve all been there: The brief is done, but it’s several pages too long. You’ve got a few hours to cut it before the filing deadline, and you can’t afford to lose substance.
What’s your first move?
Try my P-E-N approach. It kills the culprits behind 3 biggies behind empty words:
Dear 1L, I was shocked when I learned how WIDELY the grading curves vary among U.S. law schools.
— A handful of top schools are entirely pass/fail, and at the T14s I’m aware of, no one really gets below a B.
— Yet at many other schools, a large % of students fail or lose scholarships after 1L fall. The “average” is B- or even a C.
Dear 1L, Hi. I hope you are ok. Everyone seems to be in some state of reeling right now, with fall grades coming in.
If you didn’t get what you’d hoped for, please know there’s nothing wrong with you, and you are not some sort of screw up.
—> What happened is you got screwed by a brutal curve.
Never end a sentence with a preposition.
—Did YOUR middle-school teacher try to sell you that “rule,” too?
And did she also teach you, “It’s wrong grammatically” to use a preposition that way?
Well, she sold you 2 heaps of crap.
Dear 1L, Recruiting starts EARLY this year—even earlier than last.
Below is some info I’ve gathered for 2024. I hope you’ll help out by adding what you’ve been seeing and hearing in your location.
🔷 Some perspective:
Dear 1L, Matt and I wish you all a very merry holiday.
We’ve been enjoying family time with the girls at home, playing lots of games by the fire and indulging in Matt's delicious dinners. I will be back to posting again next week.
10 Ways to Become a Better Legal Writer
Dear Legal Writer, A recent remark by a BigLaw partner stopped me dead in my tracks.
On a post about legal writing (not mine), he commented,
Dear 1L, It can be hard to get started posting on LinkedIn.
What should your tone be with so many potential, diverse readers?
Try this:
Have ONE specific person in mind you’re writing to and write your post as if you are speaking ONLY to them.
Dear 1L, When I stopped practicing law in 2016, I didn’t expect the harshest part to be losing so many friends.
People in the go-go, law-firm-corporate-legal world are busy.
I’d fallen out of the loop. I didn’t have anything interesting to say anymore, I suppose, so they just stopped calling. I get it.
Dear Legal Writer, If you write “is comprised of” or “is comprised by,” you need to read this.
See if you know which of these 3 sentences is correct:
A: The cake comprised 6 ingredients.
B: The cake was comprised by 6 ingredients.
C: The cake was comprised of 6 ingredients.
Dear Legal Writer, Want to get faster at legal writing? Try the Flowers Paradigm.*
Here’s the “how-to”:
For any writing project, cut your process into 4 stages. It helps to think of the stages building a house:
My 3 Top Exam Tips + an IRAC {CREAC} Template
This is for all law students about final exams. I’ve been working really hard on something for you.
It’s a template for an IRAC essay.
It shows my mental process and how I OUTLINED my analysis of each issue--BEFORE I wrote a single word.
9-Point IRAC Primer
—EXAMS: How to Structure an IRAC Essay—
Dear 1L, Follow these 9 steps to make sure you don’t miss out on points.
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1️⃣ Identify the BIG ISSUES.