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Categories: Dear 1L, Dear 2L, Legal Writing
By Year: 2026, 2025, 2024, 2023, 2022, 2021
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Dear 1L, Justice Elena Kagan apparently didn’t rush to “write home about” her 1L fall grades, either.
She only received two, according to reports, and they came as a shock:
a B in Crim;
a B- in Torts.
True, Justice Kagan was at Harvard Law School—where simply passing might be cause to celebrate—but her story should inspire you wherever you attend.
Dear Legal Writer: Stop writing “the court found”!
“Find” and “hold” mean very different things.
▪️ “Find” refers to determining facts—what actually happened. This is the job of a fact-finder (a jury, or sometimes a judge in a bench trial or preliminary hearing).
▪️ “Hold” refers to a legal conclusion—a court’s determination of what the law means or what the law requires, given the facts.
Dear 1L, “To be sure” is a genteel expression that lawyers use a lot. Perhaps you’ve noticed.
Well, here’s why we use it and how you can do so effectively in your spring brief:
🔷 “To be sure” signals, “I will now acknowledge the point that most hurts me, in hopes of defusing it on my own terms.”
Dear Legal Writer, If I had a dollar for every time someone on The Bachelor used “myself” incorrectly . .
— “The date was amazing for Brad and myself.”
— “Sarah and myself have a real connection.”
— “This journey has really helped myself grow.”
❌ NO! NO! NO!
(Somewhere, a grammar teacher is sobbing into a rose.)
Dear 1L, Hi. I hope you are OK. Everyone seems to be in some state of reeling right now, with fall grades coming in.
Please, if you didn’t get what you’d hoped for, please know there’s nothing wrong with you, and you are not some sort of screwup.
—> What happened is you got screwed by a brutal curve.
Dear 1L, They say, “Those who get A’s end up teaching. Those who get B’s end up practicing, but they are taking orders from the C’s (who are out on the golf course).”
I’ve heard the expression articulated in a number of different ways over the years, and they all piss me off.
So here’s what I want you to remember instead:
In 2020, I was a washed-out, unemployed lawyer with zero presence (anywhere).
I hadn’t worked a “real job” in 5 years;
I’d let my lawyering skills lapse;
I’d let my people skills lapse;
I’d let my self-worth lapse;
I’d become a nobody.
But the worst part was having no community.
Dear Legal Writer: Never put a comma before beginning parentheses.
It’s unnecessary, and it’s considered redundant.
WRONG: The teacher said “hi” to only one student, (whose name was Charlie).
WRONG: The plaintiff, (who had a strong case), looked confident at the hearing.
12 resolutions for eager-to-be-better legal writers:
In 2026, I will:
Put more verbs in the active voice (1)
& use “that,” not “which”
when given the choice (2).
I’ll use “therefore” or “thus”
(but never “as such”) (3),
and I’ll throw away my “However, . . .” crutch (4).