(It also saves space--)
ORIG: A reasonable jury could not find negligence on this evidence.
REV: No reasonable jury could find negligence on this evidence. ✅
That little word “no” changes the sentence’s whole tenor and flow.
Try this in your next brief!
💌 Amanda
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Dear Legal Writer, This simple edit will instantly make your writing more authoritative.
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They say: “1L will scare you to death. 2L will work you to death. 3L will bore you to death. And then, after dying three times, the bar exam sends you to hell.”
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