Dear Legal Writer, Before you give that draft to the partner, make sure you haven't used any of these WORDY ways to say "because":

๐Ÿ“ "based on"
๐Ÿ“ "as a result of"
๐Ÿ“ "for the reason that"
๐Ÿ“ "due to the fact that"
๐Ÿ“ "in light of the fact that"
๐Ÿ“ "on account of the fact that"

All these ways take a roundabout route to get to your point.

They're also clunky to read, and they add to your word count.

To be sure, sometimes there's good reason to use a wordy way.

But that's the rare exception.

Almost always, "because" is better.

It's shorter, simpler, and unmistakably clear.

So might you swap out some wordy ways from your brief today?

๐Ÿ’Œ Amanda

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