Dear Legal Writer: It’s OK to end a sentence with a preposition

“You should never end a sentence with a preposition.” Were you taught this rule, too? Well, it’s crap.

Here’s evidence, with some important caveats to think about & references for further reading.

🔷 Bryan A. Garner, Garner’s Modern Legal English Usage, 4th ed. (2016), pp. 723-24:

“The spurious rule about not ending sentences with prepositions is a remnant of Latin grammar, in which a preposition was the one word that a writer could not end a sentence with. . . .

But if the SUPERSTITION is a ‘rule’ at all, it is not a rule of rhetoric and not of grammar, the idea being to end sentences with strong words that drive a point home. . . .

Good writers don’t hesitate to end their sentences with prepositions if doing so results in phrasing that seems natural.”

🔷 Wayne Schiess, Fine Points for Legal Writing (2019), pp. 32-33:

“Some professors and lawyers enforce a rule against ending a sentence, or even a clause, with a preposition. . . .

There is no such rule.”

BUT . . .

“Ending a sentence with a preposition might be considered informal, so if you’re writing for a professor or lawyer who follows the rule, you might have to follow it, too.”

🔷 Mignon Fogarty, Grammar Girl Quick and Dirty Tips, “Ending a Sentence with a Preposition,” Dec. 3, 2020 (website accessed Oct. 20, 2022).

“Yes, you can end a sentence with a preposition.”

“Nearly all grammarians” denounce any strict rule against sentence-ending prepositions, and any such rule is “a myth.” (citing sources)

BUT . . .

“[T]he myth is so prevalent, there are times when you should avoid doing it even though I’m saying it isn’t wrong.

For example, when you’re writing a cover letter to a potential employer, don’t end a sentence with a preposition.”

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As for me, I am always trying to become a better, more informed writer. But old habits die hard.

And so, I’ve been trying diligently for a while now to unlearn what I’d long been taught. (Five years of Latin, having a long-term client who enforced the “rule,” and other influences did not serve me well in this regard.)

I still find myself regularly rearranging sentences to avoid sentence-ending prepositions—w/o awkward wording. I find that often, sentences simply read better once refigured to avoid the dilemma.

But I also know that my view on what “reads better” may be haunted by so many years of Latin-grammar and client-focused indoctrination.

What’s your take on this one?

Fondly,

💌 Amanda

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