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Dear Legal Writer, We’ve all been there: The brief is done, but it’s several pages…
“Never end a sentence with a preposition.”
—Did YOUR middle-school teacher try to sell you that “rule,” too? And did she…
A recent remark by a BigLaw partner stopped me dead in my tracks.
Dear Legal Writer, A recent remark by a BigLaw partner stopped me dead in…
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Dear Legal Writer: If you write “is comprised of” or “is comprised by,” you…
Dear Legal Writer,
Want to get faster at legal writing? Try the Flowers Paradigm.* Here’s the “how-to”:…
Be careful with the word “draft.”
Dear Legal Writer, I got 2 kinds of contradictory, negative feedback when I was…
Are you making these 4 common mistakes in your Memo?
Dear 1L, Every year, I see the EXACT SAME substantive mistakes in 1L legalmemos….
2023 | Dear 1L | Legal Writing
Dear 1L,
When you’re new to legal writing, it’s natural to think: —Courts’ words sound better…
“Utilize” is a stilted and stupidiciosis* word
Dear Legal Writer, If you think your reader wants sophisticated words, thinkagain.Case in point:…
I got a note from “Thus” and “Therefore” overnight.
I got a note from “Thus” and “Therefore” overnight. The note said: 1: “We’re…
Dear 1L,
Better legal writers write: better briefs.better motions.better petitions.better letter briefs.better client updates.better law review…
Dear Legal Writer, Don’t be like Demi Moore.
🔷 Remember the court scene in “A Few Good Men”? Tom Cruise says, “I…